Neophyte blog blooms
Keys crunch underfoot like stones
Welcome to my plot
New buds open slow
Child sun rises fierce and bright
I hit snooze again
nice haiku’s … though you aim at the far east, the tone seems a bit more native american. This “child sun” ish- it is like you are a friggin shamen with an alarm clock
a harsh exchange
borrowed katana blow
the daily grind
-glimpse at the working world
I don’t know much about Haikus. But I’m glad to see the sun has risen. Seems an appropriate first post.
The slug awakes
Coffee brews in the pot
Hope for the day
Sorry – couldn’t help the weak effort (the daily grind got me thinking of coffee).
Enjoy the blogosphere.
so i linked over here from facebook, and felt compelled to mention i’m adding this to my giant batch of rss feeds.
also, on writing is an amazing book. i would be honored to be stranded on the streets with a copy.
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