Neophyte blog blooms
Keys crunch underfoot like stones
Welcome to my plot
–
New buds open slow
Child sun rises fierce and bright
I hit snooze again
Neophyte blog blooms
Keys crunch underfoot like stones
Welcome to my plot
–
New buds open slow
Child sun rises fierce and bright
I hit snooze again
Categories: Haiku
7 responses so far ↓
Emily // August 13, 2007 at 12:55 pm |
nice haiku’s … though you aim at the far east, the tone seems a bit more native american. This “child sun” ish- it is like you are a friggin shamen with an alarm clock
Emily // August 13, 2007 at 2:04 pm |
a harsh exchange
borrowed katana blow
the daily grind
-glimpse at the working world
scribblerist // August 13, 2007 at 2:12 pm |
Scribblerist approves!
Ben // August 13, 2007 at 4:33 pm |
I don’t know much about Haikus. But I’m glad to see the sun has risen. Seems an appropriate first post.
The Unknown Professor // August 14, 2007 at 12:39 pm |
The slug awakes
Coffee brews in the pot
Hope for the day
Sorry – couldn’t help the weak effort (the daily grind got me thinking of coffee).
Enjoy the blogosphere.
sdbecque // August 14, 2007 at 8:23 pm |
hey,
so i linked over here from facebook, and felt compelled to mention i’m adding this to my giant batch of rss feeds.
also, on writing is an amazing book. i would be honored to be stranded on the streets with a copy.
scribblerist // August 14, 2007 at 9:15 pm |
Agreed.